[quote=@Western Robot]
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Alright, Shinichi is ready to go. I also have an idea for a mentor in the works.
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He seems fine for the most part, but one thing I should say is that his personality section is kind of bare, and what is there is fairly similar to my character [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4225758]Hana[/url]. I would recommend elaborating a little bit on his personality

Another thing to note is that his powers are kinda similar to my other character Asa, but that can actually work out by her being his mentor, so that's actually a good thing

[@Dragonsinc]
Yeah I would probably prefer that, but don't feel pressured to or anything. Like I said, there aren't THAT many similarities after all