[@Malchivo] It's looking alright so far.

I reckon the personality section is a good candidate to elaborate on, now that you ask. Does Thacel have temperaments and behaviours with other people? Is he a cold and stone-faced individual or passionate with some things? It's good to explain his morality and his limits, but I can't really tell what he's like to interact with.

The whole deep analysis of war for the sake of improving is very Toun-like, which I think is fitting given your selected fatherhood. I like that. If there are Ilunabar-like traits he has inherited, that might also be a good way to flesh out the personality section, or even some other parts as well.

The only other question I really have at the moment is regarding consideration -- you might want to keep your answer secret from us, and that's fine. Does he have reasons for going out and documenting war strategy? It's not a huge thing. I mean, many characters do what they do because Fate said so at the beginning and they went 'Meh, okay.'

Anyway, I like the effort put in! It's a good thing you read the rules ;)