[@OfWindAndRain] Okay, I have... quite a few problems with this.

First off, I might need to be slightly more clear. Our characters are supposed to be humans, though the freedom eagle is hilarious.

Secondly, the "Characters have no established gender" line was meant to mean that you could choose whatever gender you wished. (Freedom is not a gender, I know you were thinking it)

Thirdly, there's not enough here. There's the very basics but I am going to need much more in the personality and more meat in some of the other areas. I don't want a bullet-point list.