[@Rhythmloid]Well, in this point of the story my characters have quieted down until Saturday night. I guess this is your time to shine. Perhaps you could develop Corinne, her friends, and her brothers a bit more over the week. So far Corinne has been passive in the story. Especially in the school. Maybe I could throw in a slice of life post here and there. 

It's time to show the world what you got! XD