It all appears to be about the passage of time...
[quote=@Polybius]
[indent][indent]The evening wore on in a way that is lightless, beneath the heavy cliffs of Teluval. The passage of time in Teluval is abysmal. The hours kept only by the great stone and brass clock nestled into a rocky crevice on [i]The Pagans' Precipice[/i], and someone forgot to wind it today. The thundering chime of the old bell fell silent just after the hour of [i]Suncrest[/i], when the ancient orange sun passed the cliff's tops...  

...The night, very late, yet very young, grew old in a way. Time was funny like that in Teluval.[/indent][/indent][/quote]...The first paragraph and final sentence. I love this.

[@Darach]I'm working on something now. I hope to have time to complete it this afternoon. (GMT -5/EST)