[@Kessir Tarkin] I'd really prefer you didn't. That's sort of the point of "approval," isn't it?

Anyway, regarding your character, the primary issue I have with it can be best elucidated by this critique of another character:

[quote=@Dead Cruiser]in the nature of this fantastic setting, Earth does not exist. You can be human, but just as in, say, Star Wars, Earth is never mentioned or alluded to.
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