I found all my mistakes and am already feeling I should have put more effort it! Thank you though! I appreciate it Genkai! I am sorry I slightly rushed it, if I don't post it I will take forever to respond as I meticulously look over every word and believe I still need to do more! Though I hope to find something here as well as look forward to posting on the guild here. I feel like I don't know what I should do next. I've not role played since school started so I am a bit rusty and have not joined a forum like this before. Though I definitely look forward to writing with you as well! As for my hobbies I shall expand them! I've died nearly four times! I don't know if I can necessarily call that a hobby but I have been in two severe car accidents which neither of them I was the driver. I also almost drowned and also was in a coma. I think this will be more interesting to tell people about but its something that is at least interesting. Hilariously, have not suffered a rock climbing incident and thank the universe that I haven't stabbed a pencil through my hand yet with writing. Though, also enjoy reading as well and watching anime as well.