[@Polaris North]

She looks good now, thanks for fixing those problems!

[@Valor]

Alright couple of questions. For the crew count you have listed 850 people, is that just for the Dauntless or for the entire fleet that miss Freyjal commands? If it's just the Dauntless then you have to downsize that, if it's her entire fleet then it seems reasonable but they are pirates after all and I'm sure many would have mixed feelings about doing the right thing. Some would probably even denounce her and continue pirating. Right now with everything she has, she is a bit overpowered.

Now, the whole bit with her meeting the Emperor is something that I wanted to do in character, not just for your character but for everyone's characters. You could probably just leave it at, "she heard the call of the Emperor, and began her journey to him with struck colors."

Other then those things needing fixed, she seems like a good character.

[@MonkeyBusiness]

Glad to see it!

To everyone else, I am now working on setting up the OOC. Except it soon.