[@TheFake][@Ryougu] Well, I thank you for your opinions. From the sounds of it, the biggest issue you guys have is with the club he's in, and how it makes his whole biography redundant by itself being redundant. I admit, I was aiming for that being for, you know, [i]really[/i] dedicated fighters, who want to get focused training in even beyond what the school provides... but, if it's not appropriate, I'll see to changing it and fixing his backstory to match. Once again, big thanks for the criticism.