[@VitaVitaAR]: I can just replace the power if it's easiest. I don't want to create an overpowered character, and I'm not too attached to the power.

[@BCTheEntity]: I liked the power, but it was pretty wordy, and kind of a slog to read through. It kind of felt as if it was a fighting series with a huge battle happening, and then it cut to one of the friends on the sideline who then gave an exposition dump. I also don't think it's cliche or at least a cliche that's been done to death.