[quote=@NightmareInd]

[@Lucius Cypher]

The suit looks good to me now, and assuming you didn't change anything to the rest of the CS (except the other section, I've seen those changes.) you are accepted! Although I would recommend having the duration of the battery less so you can upgrade it in the RP and have some more development, but it is not required.
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I politely disagree with the battery duration. I know one hour might seem like a lot for a fight, but one hour isn't going to be enough if Asahi has to wear his suit for say, a whole class. Which I imagine will take at least fifty minutes. Or if he goes out on a patrol of some sort, which certainly lasts longer than an hour. And right now he only has one battery which takes a few hours to recharge.

I understand that the Guardian One is quite powerful on its own, but it's only useful for about an hour per day. Two if Asahi can charge his batteries between bouts. Granted this weakness may be overcome if Asahi can get his hands on funding to create more batteries. Whether he can or not relies mostly on what happens to him IC.