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[@FallenTrinity]
Small edit on my last post. Somehow I didn't noticed this small detail when I wrote it.
XD

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It was from Soron, the man who was fighting outside. Lila had to hold herself to not show her fangs to that man when she saw him staring at her, almost like he was studying her. Instead, she looked at him with an extremely cold expression. It wasn't an expression a young girl like she appeared to be could make. Her predatory instincts were still strong with all the smell of blood.

[color=C6DEFF]"Your eyes... I don't like them."[/color] she said with a cold almost threatening tone, referring to the way he was staring at her.

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It was from Soron, the man who was fighting outside. Lila had to hold herself to not show her fangs to that man when she felt him getting closer to her, too close... Almost like he was studying her. Instead, she looked at him with an extremely cold expression. It wasn't an expression a young girl like she appeared to be could make. Her predatory instincts were still strong with all the smell of blood.

[color=C6DEFF]"Too close."[/color] she said with a cold almost threatening tone.

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awwww...I liked kinda like the first one honestly. it added a bit of intimidation to her but I can work with this.