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-The tactics section mentions Khazki being an "exceptionally trained brawler", yet she has no hand-to-hand skill. One does not simply  become exceptional without being an adept (or higher).

-The second last paragraph of her bio says Khazki has been in Skyrim for the "last three years after exhausting leads in Morrowind". Is the "lead" a leftover from the first sheet? Also, I need more detailed explanations for her destinations than simply adventuring. For example, which part of Morrowind culture drew her in? What's does she wish to find with her "search in the frigid Northern promise"? 

I recommend refining the final two bio paragraphs, and making sure the information is relevant to Khazki, instead of Marassa.

-Which breed is Ra'Rasargo? Bio says he's Suthay-Raht, but relations says he's Cathay.
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