[@Fabricant451] There's really only so much satire can give you, if you rhyme something 4 times with themselves in many of your songs...you eventually become what you satirize. Like real novels or stories, most prose does come from intelligence...Like Kendrick Lamar made a song called "Pussy." Sure it's a joke song, but really is it that clever if literally everyone knows how lazy mainstream rap can be?

All of those words are grade school level material. You can write strong with simple words, but denying that it isn't simple. I feel like I have to show you more lines from other artists...

"Conscious of anacondas and monsters inside my closet
My concentrations methodic a constant state of a conflict
Accommodate ‘em with coffins
It's complicating my conscience
Haunted on occasion and congregating with convents
Which is is witches? Wicked Wiccans I've weakened
On weekends we light the wick on the spliff
And split it with demons
I'm fiending the evening's evil
These people whisper their secrets
I seek written upheavals to burn churches and steeples, yea"

It's not even overly complex. (also nowhere near the best of him.) But it's clearly better written for a comprehension level. Like I saw a couple verses from Kendrik that at least had less simple words then what you provided which is what I asked for. You can be clever with words and write words the average 9 year old couldn't spell right. It's silly to think, it's somehow flawless because of the messages displayed. If parts aren't particularly clever or don't rhyme or are overly vulgar which is usually a sign of immaturity.