[quote=@WingsOfBronze] I always asked why there's no Sans? here sans. secondary character. [hider=Sans] [center][img]http://txt-dynamic.static.1001fonts.net/txt/dHRmLjcyLmZmZmZmZi5jMkZ1Y3csLC4wAAAA/headhunter.regular.png[/img][/center] [center][img]http://orig10.deviantart.net/e539/f/2015/270/b/c/undertale___sans_by_ss2sonic-d9b5fv2.png[/img][/center] [hr] [center][b]Title[/b][/center] [center]The Judge[/center] [center][b]Kingdom[/b][/center] [center]The Island of Mt. Ebott, and the Underground -- Part of the Indie Federation[/center] [center][b]Written Description[/b][/center] [center]Sans is a short skeleton with a dimpled smile and large orbits. He wears an unzipped blue hoodie, a white t-shirt, black shorts with white stripes, and a pair of pink slippers. He has white pupils that disappear when he is serious or angry. When Sans uses magical psychokinesis, his left eye flashes light blue and yellow, the colors for patience and justice, and his right pupil disappears.[/center] [center][b]Personality[/b][/center] [center]Sans is laid back, often sleeping on the job and taking breaks. His laziness is a combination of fatalism and apathy. He wonders if his indolence stems from his knowledge that any progress he makes will be erased when the timeline resets. Conversely, he suggests that this knowledge could be "a poor excuse for being lazy." As for now that he was out of world, he wonders if resets are still effective. Though Sans is usually agreeable, he becomes eerily serious at particular moments. He is also observant; Sans reads expressions and can often tell when they have already done certain tasks. He enjoys making bad, skeleton-related puns. He enjoys science fiction and loves to drink ketchup. He also hates making promises.[/center] [center][b]Game[/b][/center] [center]Undertale[/center] [center][b]Current Story[/b][/center] [center]After experiencing the resets and the genocide nd pacifist routes; he started to fear for the worse and hope for the best since that's what he can only do. Things are settled calmly after a Pacifist route and the thought of reseting lingers. One day he just slept and woke up in Pixel City. In confusion, he asked the normal citizens some serious questions, unsatisfied that he was out of his own world and timeline.[/center] [center][b]Weapons[/b][/center] [b] [list] [*] White Bones - Damage the enemy magically once hit with the bone. [*] Teal Bones - Damage the enemy magically once hit with the bone when moving. [*] Gaster Blaster - Deliver a straight beam of magic damage. [/list][/b] [center][b]STATS [color=lightblue](P) Damage- 1[/color] [color=lightblue](P) Defense - 1[/color] [color=lightblue](M)(E) Damage - 1[/color] [color=lightblue](M)(E) Defense - 1[/color] [color=lightblue]Dexterity - 6[/color][/b][/center] [center]EXP: [b][color=black]IIIIIIIIII[/color] (0/10)[/b][/center] [center][b]General Abilities [/b] Judgement- As the Judge in Undertale, he can see their stats in a glance, the effect in Pixel City differs. He can see how many characters they have killed, how high is their stats, what is their level, how high is this character's level (alpha-level or delta-level character), and how much is their EXP.[/center] [center][b]Special Abilities[/b][/center] [center][color=forestgreen]Slot One -[/color][/center] [center][b]Items[/b][/center] [center][color=forestgreen]Slot One- None Slot Two- None Slot Three- None[/color][/center] [center][b]Strengths[/b] Teleportation - Given by his fast reaction time, he can see enemy movements and can dodge them at the very fast second, mostly teleports out of range before getting hit. Teleportation ranges a mile away from the starting point. Karmic Retribuition - (would need advice) Damage will be as hard as 1xLV of a enemy/ Damage will be as hard as 1xEXP of a enemy Insta-summon - Power to instantly summon his bones and blasters. Blasters take a second to charge before firing and disappearing. Gravity Psychokinesis- Power to make anything move using gravitational force via blue magic. [b]Weaknesses[/b] Limit - He grows tired after expending loads of magic, when happened he will be forced to rest after making himself safe via teleporting away. Health - It would only be one hit for him to be dust. The easiest enemy. [/center] [/hider] plz criticize [/quote] The Strength section is not an ability section so why you are explaining abilities in there, I have no idea. We have a Frisk character and you and Frisk would have the exact same "scan"-like ability. I find that would be problem between you and [@Guardian Angel Haruki] because you both basically do the same thing. I recommend getting with her in PMs to discuss backgrounds seeing as you're playing a character from Undertale and so is she.