It actually all looks good, but you'll need some more elaborated interaction with the Koroks of the Lost Woods in your backstory for Korok Magic.

And one last problem, your race trait for Deku Scrub is missing. Korok Magic even in description says it isn't a race trait. Below is the Deku Scrub trait.

[b]Bloom[/b]: As a Deku Scrub you can hide underground in a stationary position as a flower, and pop up to shoot, or eject oneself into the air and fly using the leaves on your head. You also have the ability to jump on water. Deku Scrubs are unless underground, vulnerable to fire, though fire will still prompt you to get out of the ground. As a natural talent they can shoot seeds out of their barrel-like noses for 1 heart of damage.

You can fit it in any way you please, as long as it's within the limitations of the system, as all your skills look okay to me.