[@Buddha]

Yeah, that helps a lot.

[hider=explanation for each point you made]I wasn't sure on the rules for bumping, so I included that in this. As for the title, that was enough for a lot of people on other sites, so I didn't think about it. Same thing with the 'wall of text', aside from separating the story, the character sheet form, and the rules of the RP with an hr, I didn't do much to make the wall fancy, so I didn't think to do it here. The lack of people checking interest checks probably did it too, but I was under the impression that it would be the best route to take, so that's why I did it. And, yeah, bad luck tends to be a thing that follows me around.[/hider]

In other words, if you didn't want to read that, I just didn't think to change anything from what worked on other sites, didn't know how things worked here, and usually have a lot of bad luck. I will try to fix all of that, and thank you.