So sorry I meant to reply to this but then we got talking on the other one, and working on my story. I forgot >< Haha I have no problem with Rumpel's being that long, though I have to say that Ariel is so pretty and I loved her story especially Flounder being the brave one that saved her and not the other way like in disneys version. I do love the fact he turned into the Dark one, it gave him more of a story line then in the fairy tales. Though I never really liked the fact that the had a son. I mean it was good for the story in Once but it would be a little bit of a lose end I think..... So far Belle's story is going well. By the way I'm turning Belle into a bit of a thief, I figured it would make an interesting change.