[@LordofthePies]
Thanks for going back through and putting more work into it, it looks much better. As long as you're willing to put in the same amount of effort on your posts, I'm good to accept her. I'm running a quality-over-quantity ship here, so as long as you put in a couple paragraphs with good substance on posts, there's no issue. 

I would like to ask if her madness has much of an impact on how she acts, or if it's more occasional hallucinations? Is she violent when it happens? 

While you're moving her over into the character tab, would you mind:
-bolding the categories
-under fighting style, "the arrow the seems" seems to be a typo
-in her backstory, third paragraph, typo thieving "thriving" 

It's gonna be a little bit until the IC is live, to give people time to make characters (me included)