Alright guys, so far it seems the biggest problem over all has been the separation between what can be done with the abilities of the character and what the character can actually do. I know it doesn't seem like a big deal but I do prefer the distinction cause it's pretty big. It's the difference between and op jerk and acharacter who will develop over time. Admittedly I have become a bit more critical after becoming a writing tutor at my school... so many papers XD 

Still, individually: 

[@TheHangedMan]im sure it's fine but gimme some time to go over and I'll let you know when to move it to the Cs tab. 

[@Jangel13]alright, so like suku you can move it over. Make sure everything is in order and then in just waiting for the roleplay to start.

[@Polaris North]alright so you'll let me know once you're done for another look over or are you already done? Just making sure here. 

[@Spanner]sorry again it's just the distinction. It's like you have these potentially op skills and then just having the magic there. It's primarily the wording. And also because as I stated my knowledge is lacking a bit and I end up having to research. 

Just make the distinctions between potential skill and actual. If he's only up there in terms of physical strength that's fine for me. And since he IS a dragon, although not on the red dragon emperor technically, I can bump it up to five and one mutated piece. Andthe others will likely mutate as he moves along. Depending on the remainder of the class though I MAY have to bump you to queen since he is for now potentially the strongest/most balanced. 

But I like him as a pawn too. A real ringer. 

Additionally, I think if you guys have time we can also use discord for collaboration on posts in some areas because there is a chance titan pad will be shutting down soon and I don't know many sites like it. There is also google docs but like... come on... and pm is fine but it takes a while you know? 

I won't be on too much more until later today so if you have something to say or discuss hit me up their. 

Finally, any suggestions on how I could make tsumiki and better more respectable and powerful king?