[@Legion02]

Your character fits into the setting and looks fine to me. Feel free to add him to the NS section.

Also, while it's up to you ultimately. Archon of War already has quite a few Exarchs while Spleen to the south has only about two for sure.  

[@Willy Vereb]
Mongrol orks lead by Obould Many-Arr- er, shots! I guess they're like our version of Qunari. The sheet is moving in the right direction, I'll wait until it's finished but we already talked about most of what you plan so I look forward to it. 

Edit: Also did you really recycle Tolkien's orcs? XD