[quote=@KoL] First, her abilities are quite alright but perhaps a bit too broad in scope. Maybe you could add some limitations, or trim the less important effects for the time being. Everyone will have opportunities to develop as the story progresses, there's no need to try to cover too much ground at this point. [/quote] Fair enough, I cut down the flask she can make to 8 specific ones. Does that make it better? I am glad you think she's interesting, she was fun to design and hopefully will be fun to rp.