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So far what's happened? Jinchurikki meeting, one immature jinchurikki try's to prove herself, Ria fucks with kota's head....
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I think I either missed this immature Jinchuuriki trying to prove herself, or you misunderstood something, hmm!

Oh, yeah, obviously not done. Just needs a bit more of... story. A-ye. I promise it will be good.