[@Oddsbod] So Allen's the one who has the final say on the character but as Co-GM I wanted to weigh in and let you know what I was thinking.

First of all, I love the character and his backstory, and I think it's a perfect edition to the world we're building here (plus I really like how you play with the Chosen One story here, really clever). That being said, I think his power set would be an issue. Your fighting style suggested that he could copy abilities from opponents and use them as his own (ie Shujinko from Mortal Kombat Deception), but his actual special moves seem to be random abilities that he took from offscreen opponents. It comes across as a bit inconsistent and it's a little confusing trying to work out what exactly you can do.

I don't want to dictate what your character's powers are (because again it's still a great character and inconsistent moveset aside his powers are really cool), but I would suggest streamlining his powers a bit more. Personally I would cut it in half and build my moveset around either his ability to copy his opponents moves or just having a wide variety of different special abilities to draw on. I think the copying powers would be a better choice for this character based on his backstory but again I don't want to dictate how you build him.

Either way, I'm interested to see him in action and I hope the issues can be worked out quickly. :)