[@The Narrator] Okay, I like having a mongrel, didn't expect anyone to go for that. I think one thing I might want to change is the source of his power? Specifically these things he summoned and offered his service to in exchange for power. I'm hoping to avoid any proven existence of otherworldly beings, it's something I had to make sure Draco wasn't doing with his Torgureni character. Characters can [i]believe[/i] or have faith in whatever they choose, but I would prefer if no one had any direct contact with gods or beings not of the world. If that makes sense, dunno how well I explained that.

[@DracoLunaris] I like the changes, thanks for making the effort on those :)

[@VoiD] If you'd like to write up a different character, there's still time, though you do currently have the oldest character submitted, which is something of a unique spot. If you'd feel better going with something else, though, go for it.

[@ShyDot] I totally understand. Currently I have... 8 character submissions in a finished or mostly finished state, and I'm still expecting potentially up to 6 more (wow, that's... yeah, that's a lot). I think I could take maybe 10 in total? The number keeps going up, haha, but I really have to stop there. I don't want more than 5 fighting in the arena at one time except in very special cases, and too many characters in general will probably cause things to get a little out of hand. So it's up to you if you want to write up a character. I wish I could guarantee everyone a spot, but with this many people I just can't.

There's also always the (high) chance that a few will drop after the RP begins, it's just what tends to happen with RPs, so if people would like to be put on a waiting list to potentially be introduced later, that can happen too.

[@Viciousmarrow] Really nice character :) Should be very entertaining to watch. The only thing I'd ask spell-wise is that you make her Void Spear have a preparation time of a post, where she's vulnerable for a moment. Since it seems like seriously heavy damage or just death if it hits an enemy, it should have some substantial risk that goes with it.

In general that's the rule I want to have on spellcasting. The more powerful the effect, the more difficult it is to cast, the bigger of a target you put on yourself by casting it.

[@CollectorOfMyst] I'll be PM'ing you and [@AngryBadger] next.

[@Themerlinhawk] Fire away with the PM whenever you're ready.