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[@dabombjk] And while you're at it, you may want to make the CS less... how do I put this, casually worded? That's just my personal taste, but it sort of breaks the flow. You don't need to say "as an example" most of the time, because the things in the CS are already examples.
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Yea ok. I like the show, but i use it as backround noise and I was not sure I was making a decent when I wrote it. I did not wanna make it seem too.....I dont know I just wanted to make sure it was something that could fit in the universe. Not something too stretched out