[@Kessir Tarkin] Overall everything looks good. The only thing that sounds kinda off is his callsign honestly. Ionno, at least to me, 'Red Flag' doesn't roll off the tongue quite as easily as 'Gramps' or 'Rama' or some of the other callsigns. The idea of one on one dogfighting duels is also interesting, and while it definitely is a passtime, one on one dogfighting doesn't necessarily translate to the full measure of a pilot. IE you wouldn't expect a pilot that specializes in bombers to prove themselves by 1v1-ing a guy in a interceptor- that are meant to shoot down bombers, you'd expect them to prove themselves by flying simulated strike missions, etc. 

I mean, other than the callsign though, there's nothing worth complaining about. Consider Rezzik accepted.