[quote] Harp of Healing/Harp Performance (c): Is a Skill that gives the user the ability to exorcise and heal others by playing a melody with a harp. Admonishment to the King of Knights (b): Removes a buff from opponent, only affects royals. Grace of the Unexpected Birth (b): Charges own Noble Phantasm.[/quote] All those belong under skills [quote]- Mana piercing wind blades (b): When he focuses his energy into his bow it grants him the power to breach through magic based armour as well as their normal armour, this drains him of his mana and cannot use all the time. [/quote] Should be renamed to Mana Burst - Wind and placed under skills as well. I'm not even sure it should be on him he's not credited with it in or out of fate/grand order. Jeanne's basis for having flame burst is the fact that her original ruler phantasm was her burning in flames for a suicidal attack. === Your main character should not be anywhere near A- magic levels if he was given magic in the first place. It should be around E or D levels which will hamper Tristan. A level are for mages around the level of top tier magi or those with a strong/legacy name in the type moon universe like Archibald, or Edefelt. Your character was literally born without magical circuits it's ridiculous to think he'd have that high a power level. Shiro has to make a contract with the world, and Rin had to give her magical energy to him to use Unlimited Blade works. The reason I allowed it for Charak is because Kiyohime needs it to actually do anything and without opening any cans of worms I won't say anymore on the subject. The following need descriptions. [quote] Sonic Scream (4): Absolute Silence (4):[/quote]