Sorry for taking so long everyone I've felt like garbage the past few days. [@Utrax]Mothman looks good to me. Good balance, though I feel his assumed name is super generic. No one should be named Joe Smith unless they're wearing a red shirt on a vessel crewed by people 1 week from retirement. As long as he's called Mothy or something more distinct then it's fine in my book. [quote=@Drag] It's a little fuzzy, in terms of the current date I've personally seen it as taking place some point near the late eighties (Though liberties can be taken there what with fantastical enchantments and magic etc.) As for how long the Tales have been around..... Hm, It'd have to be a fair bit of time (Which for Tales, time isn't really a big deal to them) I'd personally see it somewhere around the twenty year mark give or take [/quote] I'd actually like to say that we're in the early 90's or late 80's. As for how long Tales have been in the 'New World' I'd say about twenty years or so, but that isn't very much time for a Tale. [@smarty0114] Alright let's take a look at Tinker Bell... Generally a Tale's 'actual age' is how long their particular story has existed. However since Tinker Bell is a fairy (who have been apart of countless stories for a LONG time) it's understandable that she'd be a 1000 years or older by Tales standards. Her backstory is fine. However her abilities... -Having magic for a fairy is fine, but you need to be more specific. What kind of spells can she use? How many does she know? If you don't establish these things to us then you could potentially have her simply do whatever's convenient at the time. Please establish a set number of spells that Tinker Bell knows. After all the strength of magic isn't having a spell for every problem, it's having a handful of spells that can be applied in various ways. That or just something to melt people's faces. -What do you mean by 'special damage' in regards to her pistols? As in specific damage to Tales themselves or something else? Please go into more detail. Finally, go into more detail regarding fairy dust, where it's kept, est. Since it's one of the only major weaknesses she has to balance out her gunplay and magic. Beyond that I like her. Just work on these issues and you'll be golden.