[quote=@Mr Allen J]
I honestly think the biggest problem a majority of the roleplayers on this site face is that they can't grasp "Show, don't tell."
[/quote]

I agree. I am guilty of this in the past, but after playing a few games and writing a few stories it has become much easier to handle. Learning how to show and not tell could provide a bit of suspense,because if noone knows how they'll act or react,then you can catch them offguard!