[quote=@BellBottomBlues]
Haha, what do you mean? I think its fine.
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I meant that I read my post again, and it looks meh. :P

On a more positive note, I have more plot details forming. For one, I've got a new elvish villain cooking things up. Additionally, Eru may be young, but she's a schemer. From here on out, she won't just be re-acting to story events - she'll be manipulating them. Once she has a moment to settle down and think, she'll start cooking up plans. It'll be so exciting. xD