[quote=Gowi]
Before I can say anything, I need to see this finished—though naming conventions in Kataloni are uniquely Japanese as well as their weapons are reminiscent of that same culture. Keep me posted.I know you understand the ramifications of the eternity force and the corrupting bits about it, so I’m sure you’ll be writing the overbearing virtuous natures of the eternity force. So I’m looking forward to that, and as I’ve said before I like bits about Ari—and the cultist background. Also, curious if you’re sticking with the Kasratu name as it sounds relatively Asian in nature? Was his family descended from the Salasi peoples? Kata? Ludosi? Curious.– I’d like to know a bit more about this even if it’s a bit laid in the backstory; also why does it sound to me like the totem here is one of the virtue named Justice rather than Humility, etc. Give me a reply on the above and I’m sure this thing will likely be ready to go.The anglo-indian appearance intrigues me as you describe landeian origin, which I describe as “generic terran”. I wonder if that landeian ethnicity has been watered down through Khani (hindu) and Salasi (tibetan/shaolin) family members? I have no questions or qualms with techniques or anything as is. Approved. Though I would like some notes on his earlier travels and such. =)The only thing I’m really concerned about with this amazing piece of prose is the possession technique. How do you propose this is balanced and so on? Otherwise this thing is ready to go.
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Sure, I'll give you the details, and yes, there was intermixing, which is why he's dark complexioned

I'd prefer to do it over some sort of IM though.
Do you have Steam? I can chat and tell you about it on there