This is what I have so far I have a little more to add to the Bio but this is the general idea tell me what you think?

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[b]<Name:/>[/b] 
Hanzo Takeda
[b]<Nickname(s):/>[/b] 
Gentleman Jack
[b]<Gender:/>[/b] 
Male
[b]<Age:/>[/b] 
30

[b]<Occupation:/>[/b] 
Private Security Contractor/Head of Takeda Family
[b]<District:/>[/b] 
10

[b]<Height:/>[/b] 
5' 11"
[b]<Weight:/>[/b] 
185 lbs

[b]<Appearance:/>[/b]
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[b]<Personality:/>[/b]
On the surface Hanzo is a very care free outgoing individual enjoying life to its fullest. As the owner of his own private security company, Gentleman Jack's Security, he is privileged to make ridiculous amounts of money guarding the over privileged and as such lives a rather lavish life frequently traveling back and forth to Alpha to enjoy the more expensive aspects of life. Known to be a bit of a ladies man Jack is almost always seen with at least a girl on each arm to satisfy his rather, exotic, desires. But there is a side of him that only few know and most who did would rather that they didn't

As the head of the Takeda Family Hanzo is a cold and ruthless tactician who prioritizes money above all others, including his own family. While he generally tends to keep himself away from the actually "dirty work" he is known to occasionally pull the trigger and get his hands dirty. Even though his time of Head of the Family has been a short he has already pulled several smaller families and garnered the respect of many and this has fed his ego even further. 

[b]<Biography:/>[/b]
While his apperance may not show it now Hanzo had a very rough childhood. His father Kenjiro was a small time thug and was often either drunk or high and would either beat on his mother, sister or him. This taught him very early that if he was to survive in this world he would have to be as cold and ruthless as a man that could beat children or women. As a small child he would work for the small time street gangs as a package runner, look out or even an informant when the time came for it. In time and as he grew older his father would eventually come to use his son as a tool to grow his own fledgling empire and for a time Hanzo played along. 

It took ten years of hard work and sacrifice but Kenjiro along with Hanzo built an empire that would become a major player among the districts. With the major shut down of 11, 18, 19, and 20 business became slow for a while and so Hanzo left the family in order to build up his own empire and have his own money which caused a great divide among the family. During his time Hanzo became well known among the higher ups in Alpha as a man that would procure just about any and everything that the heart could possibly want and soon took on the moniker of Gentleman Jack to cover up any possible ties to the Takeda Family.

Five years passed and Hanzo had finally made a name for himself as a private security contractor and had all but forgotten the crime family he left behind, until the day that he found out that his father had died. The family lawyer had come by his place of work and for a moment he almost felt like he would miss the old man. Ever since that day Hanzo has walked a very fine line trying to balance his life as the head of a major crime family and the proprietor of his own company.  
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