[quote=@Thread Generator SIN] [@GamerXZ] I'm a little against the idea of using telekinesis on organics(people). Other than that the sheet looks fine. Fyi, scientifically speaking, the energy required to create a sound wave capable of puncturing steel(don't even wanna think about shattering it) is equal to that of about 2 nuclear bombs going off...give or take. Each time Aurora uses that little singing voice of hers, it would be like standing next to 2 Hiroshimas. As a matter of fact, the actual sound waves would be the least of your worries. The winds, in excess of 300mph along with the shock wave from the sound would pretty much liquefy people. But we can just use sci-fi movie logic for this instance. That way she doesn't level entire [b]continents[/b] with her voice. [@Mistress Dizzy]Never hate your work! I learned a long time ago to stop being super-critical of my own work. It's healthy to be a little critical but you have to remember, we're here to have fun...not mimic being in an ap writing class. [/quote] Sorry about that XD Actually, I can make it so her sound wave is equal to the normal "knock someone across the room" level and limit the telekinesis to affecting themselves and inorganics and material that isn't humans XD