[@UnknownScarlet4]Just looked at it. What you have listed as a general ability reads more like a 'Strength', which, as Haruki said, you should have along with weaknesses. Also, this isn't as important, but you don't have to summarize his game in 'Current Story'; it's more of a "what are they doing now" segment. As far as I can see, no "nerf" is really necessary. Though, when you do have it finished, make sure to submit it here, in the OOC for approval, and tag [@Holy Soldier] when you do. He has a thing about that.