[@lavulman] I've read Jill's sheet and I am digging the theme you have going. I like how you managed to make her moveset seem like something out of rodeo or cattledrive with her motorcylce and whip. The idea of a superhero family is amusing, and the overal flair is amusing. My main issue with the sheet is related to how the information is formatted. I understand having the character have different moves be available in different forms; I used a similar mechanic with Otsana. There is nothing wrong with having a resource system either. However the information about both the Forms and Resource Costs, I feel, is poorly organized. For example, I needed to ask Savo what you meant by "TB" and "BB", which I undersand to be Trailblazer and Beautiful Blaze. Once I understood that my understanding of your movelist became much clearer. A short glossary of terms would help. My suggestion is largely organizational. The attacks can be split up into three categories: On Foot, On Motorcyle, and Both. It also seems that the type of EXACT energy, Ex-Cells vs Ex-Seeds (Love the puns BTW), are directly tied to if the attack is used in TB or BB form. If that is the case, then you could just state that a particular attack requrires X 'charges' of the relevant resource. I also noticed that you didn't mention a max level of charages for each resource in the fighting style description. My other suggestion is to obfuscate certain aspects for simplicity. For the Ex-Cells and Ex-Seeds, the only major difference between the two I could see is how quickly they charge and their elemental associations. Since they are both derived from Jill's Ki, consider combining the two on a mechanical level, as in just keep track of the total number of charges between the two systems unless you want the suit and bike to have seperate power sources. You could still choose fire or electricity with each attack. In conclusion, I do like the high concept of the character. However I feel that the relatively straightforward ideas are muddled by confusing formatting of the data. At the very least, my 1:30 am self had difficulty following all the information.