[@PharaohAtem] Both of those abilities, as you described them, are too powerful for this RP. Transmutation might be okay, but I won't allow anything as powerful as Fullmetal Alchemist transmutations. Like, the ability to extract pure metal from a raw ore, or remove poisonous substances from plants once identified is the level of power I'd want that to be kept at. Let me know what your idea is. [@Nagariin] The Leviathan Blade is too powerful. A buster sword is way too heavy for anybody with human of strength to wield, and adding a defensive barrier to an offensive technique is too much. My suggestion would be having Numbo manifest as a wraith blade. I would allow it to phase through solid matter while still dealing magical damage, but at the same time, it would not be able to block anything. I would also have something like this have a very limited duration before a recharge period. Like, it would be good for one attack, because something like this is already very powerful for the scope of the RP. Also, upon looking at your profile again, I noticed you have "healing pots." Please describe exactly what those are. [@Esailia] Perhaps you could consider the term Mithra from Final Fantasy XI. You should look them up. [@Force and Fury] Very nice bio! He's approved. [@DocTachyon] Looks very good. Approved. [@BangoSkank] Looks good to me. Approved. [@Drunk Uncle Bob] With those alterations, your character is approved. [@checkeredsoul] Better, but I would still want you to pick either plant or fire magic. Also, I'd like you to be more specific on the plant magic if you pick it. What kinds of plants can she grow? Rose Bushes? Small trees? It's still a bit vague what she can actually do. I will say that manipulating plants she didn't create is out, and rapidly growing plants that could be used as food/medicine/supplies is also out. That would trivialize the idea of exploring and finding useful things. Perhaps they wither away without constant focus.