[@POOHEAD189] Looks great! I read over the sheets and found it to be pretty well in order and you incorporated my suggestions excellently. As stands, it has a really good narrative flow and a logical consistency to it that ironed out the jarring transitions you had before, and it's a great sheet! The only thing I noticed was in his relationship section, you still have the Knights of the Silver Fist still there even though it appears they were edited out. 

Unless Cold and Peik have anything to add, I think this is good to go!