[@Lord Orgasmo] It's pretty good. I'd just like some general idea of his height (So I can be like "The tall warlord" or w/e is appropriate, instead of another vague 'he' or having to use his name six times in the same paragraph if he shows up that much in one). I may think of a couple more things after I go to bed, but they'll all probably just be small things.


[b][i]Also, if anyone happens to skim this and is making a mage character, I completely changed the 'magecraft' section of the OP to try to clarify some stuff. It's, at its core, mostly the same, but the more nuanced stuff is better explained.[/i][/b]