[@TechnoWizROK] I'll leave the detailed critiquing to others, but for possible clarification to the reflex thing. The signals going to the muscles is one thing. But then the muscles also have to have the reaction time to respond to signals it is receiving. So a faster signal does not immediately equate to faster reaction time. That is what I believe they are getting at.

Aside from the magic and abilities of the character I'm curious how he will interact with others. You've created a strong lone wolf character. Wondering how you'll integrate, if at all, with any of the existing groups. Suppose if you're going for a character that is alone most of the time then that'll work.