[quote=@Nightrunner]It's really thin and whimsical on purpose, but what do you think is nonsensical, specifically? If I actually skipped a beat so far as basic logic goes, I wouldn't mind realizing it now rather than later.
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Well, if you want to the issues that I see, I would say the child employment thing would be the first one. But if it were just that I would probably shrug and move on, so the concepts that tick the big ‘x’ in my box would range from the idea that a janitorial wage will pay for the kind of financial investment for his education and the metaknowledge that The Flash and Doctor Mid-Nite got their powers through science as I would image neither have wrote tell-all books about their life story.

[quote=@Ruby]Is it the kind of issues that affect IC action?
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The metaknowledge might, but really I doubt we’d see it come up in-game. So no, probably not.