[quote=@alexfangtalon] [@Vahir] I was going with Daybreak being a name the two came up with to hide themselves. Her mother was a Hathal. They are probably still around. They were small and only had two sons and a daughter at the time Alder and Mira ran away together leaving them with only the two sons. [/quote] Why have a surname at all if they are running away together and living as commoners? Being the only commoners/peasants with a surname in a little village does not help with staying inconspicuous. Daybreak does sound cool though. Wouldn't their parents have just disowned them or something. [@Vahir] What was Edwyle's father like? What was the reaction/drama after Alder Cade ran off to elope and live in hiding? Sorry if my questions are tiresome, and I am aware not necessarily my business, but I just always like when people critique and questions the bits in my CS's that need a little push. Helps me make a more rounded and fully developed character. :)