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No one yet, please see our rework suggestions below.
 
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[@alexfangtalon] [u]Sadie Hill[/u] - Sadie is more or less accepted, but before we give your character the full green light, we needed some confirmation. Although depression and mental illnesses are very real, we are hoping to keep the IC environment of this roleplay very happy, young, and [i]free[/i]. It would put a damper on the entire mood of the roleplay to have a character that is frequently down. As long as Sadie isn’t continually somber or reliving her dark past as a character theme, this shouldn’t be a problem. Please get back to us on this and we will revise our decision accordingly.
 
[@BrutalBx] [u]Sami Alejandro[/u] - You indicate in the appearance section that Sami has multiple tattoos. As a 16 year old in small town USA, this doesn’t seem very realistic. Most shops don’t tattoo until you’re 18 unless you have crazy amounts of parental permission and sign offs on it - even then, it is rare. As such, we ask that you either make it so your character doesn’t have tattoos, or indicate how they got them exactly - i.e. parents made the drive out to Denver and signed off (perhaps one high quality tatt), or they got their cousin to secretly do it in a back alley using pen ink and the ‘stick and poke’ method (maybe one or two really shitty quality tatts).
 
[@mskennedy615] [u]Jocelyn Fields[/u] - We have the same comments about tattoos as we indicated above, please adjust Jocelyn’s appearance section accordingly. Also, we see that Jocelyn is from NYC. Our vision for this roleplay was for most students to be from Westworth and the surrounding areas, or to have lived there for a very long time - this is good for having a sociable, tight knit cast. We would ask that if you wish to have Jocelyn be from Brooklyn, that she would have moved to Westworth with her family at a much younger age than Sophomore year - perhaps elementary school? Lastly, you indicate that her father is a principal of a local school. We already have the Westworth principal written out in character, we recommend that Jocelyn’s father be the principal of a nearby school district, like Littleton, if that is okay with you.
 
[@Drazah] [u]Jack Talbott[/u] - Arms dealerships aren’t too much of a thing in Colorado, in fact they verge on illegal. A suggestion that the GM team has that fits the flavor of small town USA might be a local hunting shop? Think like a low scale Gander Mountain or Dick’s Sporting Goods, would that work? This shop would likely be located in Littleton or some other small city on the outskirts of Westworth. Additionally, the personality section of Jack’s CS is a little too short. Please expand upon his character more, what is Jack really like inside and out? Sell his personality to us. Also, as we have mentioned about characters being from out of town - we really want our cast to have been members of the Westworth area and community for a long time to avoid the ‘loner’ character archetype. Please modify Jack’s history so that he and his family have been located in the area for a longer amount of time. Also, Jack’s family appears to be wealthy if they make frequent trips to Europe. Can you please clarify where this money comes from? Only a few select families in Westworth are above middle class, and the reason for wealth is expanded upon in their background. Lastly, you indicate that Jack is a lacrosse star. Unfortunately, Westworth High is [i]tiny[/i], and the sports opportunities are limited (for both cost and lack of participation reasons) to: Football | Cheerleading | Baseball | Softball | Boy’s Basketball | Girl’s Basketball | Boy's Soccer. Please exchange lax for one of the other available options.