[@NuttsnBolts] Force of habit in regards to the paragraph set up, even though you are completely correct in regards to starting new paragraphs. I can certainly get that patched up, will certainly change how it looks, but if it reads smoother, fine by me.

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Bare in mind that Lorral isn't currently alone thanks to Inkarnate's post.
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That was more of a case of Sep, far as I understood the prior posts, not being able to see anyone else from his position. Not so much omitted due to forgetting, but due to not being able to actually see said person from his point of view. I can certainly alter that if it makes it easier, though.

EDIT: Got the paragraphs better spaced out and addressed the misuse of their versus there. Apologies on that minor one, probably should have woken up a bit more before posting properly.