[quote=@BladeSS4] Well here is my attempt at a new character. Still not very good when it comes to making a history or backstory but I hope this works. [hider=Tenshi Koga]Tenshi Mizuru Name: Tenshi Koga Age: 22 Magic: Water Manipulation Magic The name is what it is manipulating water with magic and making appear through means of magic. To use in many ways, and many forms somewhat like maker magic except it only can keep its forms through magical energy, once the magic stops the water just turns back into its original form of water. Magic Level: B History: Tenshi was born in Hargeon Town, his first home was within a small fishermen family. For the early years of his life he was once afraid of water, afraid of drowning to death in the vast ocean. When he was ten years old, his family's fishing boat was destroyed, with him and his family on the boat. They were out sailing when they got caught up in a storm. The ship was torn apart by brutal waves and the sheer might of a water spout. He fell off the ship when a massive wave crashed into it He nearly met the same fate as his mother and father did as he almost drowned to death. He didnt drown though, he was saved by something that manage to get him out of the water and to the edge of a beach. Tenshi's memories of this are rather vague but he swears he was saved by a mermad. Other people believe Tenshi saved himself as his magic revealed itself after this day. He could control and manipulate all forms of water. Some believe he manipulated it in that dire moment to get himself to safety. After this day Tenshi went and tried to hone his skills on his one but eventually made his way to a guild to the Phoenix wing guild. Personality: Talkative, friendly, sarcastic, cocky, arrogant , just a few things to describe Tenshi but his personality is more then this. These are just some of his personality that are very obvious. He is also very brave and protective of his comrades and guild. He is easily angered when it comes to insulting his guild that he is apart of or insulting/hurting his friends. Tenshi likes to show off with big displays of unneeded effort. Especially when it comes to using his magic and what things he does with it. Tenshi also likes to 'party' whether that be drinking a lot, or partying by fighting. Guild and guild mark location: Phoenix Wing(if my character can start up in a guild) On top his right hand Team Members: None as of yet Three Strengths: 1.Can Breath Underwater 2. Very Creative 3. Wounds are healed faster when submerged in water Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable) 1. Lightning/ Electricity 2. Powers are weakened with less water around, 3. Very easily distracted Greatest Love: Magic Motivation: To learn more about himself and about how he was saved long ago when he started to use magic. Appearance: [hider=Appearance][img]http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/fairy-tail-oc-rpc/images/d/d5/Samy_Full.png/revision/20130925151233[/img][/hider] Additional Details: N/A[/hider] [/quote] I'm good with it. Pass. [quote=@TechnoWizROK] [hider=Nico Flamel] Name: Nicodemus 'Nico' Flamel Age: 23 Birthday: July 17th Magic: [hider=Tattoo Magic] Tattoo Magic - Nicodemus's body can generate tattoos on a whim, producing many runic tattoos that enhance his body and magic. Most tattoos are temporary but there are few that are etched permanently: [list] [*]Rune of Strength: Placed on various key points of the human body, the runes make his muscles stronger and faster. [*]Rune of Fortitude: Runic arrays painfully carved onto his bones develops the density up to staggering levels helping it become incredibly resistant to force. [*]Rune of Life: Engraved onto his very heart, granting him endurance and vitality that would be difficult to challenge. [*]Rune of Lightning: A series of runic tattoos, at the base of the skull, triples the reaction rate by superconducting the neural system.[/list][/hider] [hider=Rune Mastery] Rune Mastery - Possessing a prodigious knowledge of most known runic languages, Nico can utilise multiple runic circles and arrays to accomplish various feats of magic:[list] [*]Barriers: The overall durability of these barriers depends on the quality and complexity of the runes, on a whim using his Tattoo Magic he can block blows from conventional weapons with ease. With a pre-prepared runic array magic can withstand most high-level magic. [*]Seal: Able to seal away inanimate objects for later use, or in the case of high-grade seals the same for attacks. Often Nico would seal away his opponent's attacks, using his tattoos on his own body. [*]Limited Elemental Magic: There are runic symbols for all five main elements; fire, wind,lightning water and earth. Nico, using his extensive knowledge of runes can employ these elements (his affinity with each is weaker in the line of order: left to right) through the use of many runic tattoos across his body, even allowing for some combination attacks. However he is easily taxed using it and his control over the elements pales in comparison with a magic user who specialises with the elemental affinity.[/list] [/hider] [hider=Imperial Eye] Imperial Eye - Hereditary eye magic granting abilities that has been passed down through the royal Flamel bloodline, which is unlocked and activated after chanting an incantation. Far more taxing on his stamina to use than either Tattoo Magic or Runes.[list] [*]King’s Sacred Commandment: Any form of Caster magic is able seen as ‘colored strands’ of intent shaping the magic and the ethernano powering it. With this ability Nico can discern different types of Caster magic with just a glance and even snap the link between intent and ethernano which causes the magic to cease be. Though this is only possible within the range of his perception and the higher level a magic is, the more strands that are needed to be broken and therefore more energy and time is expended doing so. [*]King’s Divine Judgement: Requiring direct eye-to-eye contact, the Imperial Eye can judge whether or not a person is innocent. For the guilty it induces an illusion where they relive the torment and terror they have inflicted onto others. This ability can be effectively resisted by the strong-willed or the insane. [*]King’s Transcendant Blade: Requiring the full recital of the complete verse of incantation, it can call upon a giant building-sized sword, named 'Ea' "The Sword That Cut the World Apart", to fall from the skies onto a selected area. The impact is devastating, shaping the very earth with its power, making sure to leave nothing behind in its wake. The use of such magic leaves him completely spent of magic for a whole day. [/list][/hider] Magic Level: A History: [hider=History] In the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was slain by his Fiore comrades and his family was banished. Five hundred years into the present and after the rise and fall of the Black Wizard, magic being forced into hiding, the subsequent hunting for magic, and countless assassination attempts, the last remaining direct descendant of the Flamel bloodline has been born into the world without lands or wealth and after a gruesome childbirth; parents. Even centuries after a broken promise there are still men loyal to the name though not for noble reasons, the faceless men that have taken on the newly-named Nicodemus Flamel are more than displeased with how magic is regarded in this time and age and wish to manipulate him to become their own puppet king. But they would be foolish to think a child with an old name would be enough to regain his rightful seat of power, they had hidden far from the eyes of the world and hired the best of tutors; educating him in languages, sciences, mathematics, politics, combat and most especially magic. With time he grew into a man worthy of the title that is rightfully his and with that the men who took him in offered up a piece of parchment left to him from his dying mother. On it were scant remnants of his Family Words: I am the Soul of the King My blood is royal And my soul is noble Seeking what is rightfully mine I shall transcend existence And ascend to my divine throne For I am the King of the Soul With these words uttered Nico had brought upon divine judgement among the conclave of liars and manipulators, seeing them for who they really are. Uncovering their true intentions and in his rage, he had summoned Ea from the skies and demolished their stronghold to bits. As exhausted and deprived of magic he was then, with little time before the authorities would come to investigate he fled the scene, off into the shadows to rest and recover. Now Nicodemus Flamel is set on a journey to reclaim his rightful throne through his own power. What shall lay on his path to do so? [/hider] Personality: Without question, Nicodemus’s most prominent personality trait is his ego. This is true whether it manifests itself in his “vengeful monarch” or “noble champion” modes. Though capable of kindness and fairness, he’s usually impulsive and overconfident, with little regard for the consequences of his actions. Guild and Guild-Mark Location: - Three Strengths: 1. Groomed to rule; skilled in diplomacy, court politics, managing matters of the state, etc. 2. Possesses an iron liver, has yet to meet anyone able to drink him under the table. 3. Displays an indomitable will by meeting his body, mind and spirit’s limits and exceeding them. Three Weaknesses: 1. An arrogance which is common amongst royalty though he still recognises those who are well above himself. 2. Has a tendency to rely on his two lesser magics before resorting to the Imperial Eye. 3. Any slip-up using Rune Magic can lead to severe magical backlash even if Nicodemus is second to none in this field of magic. Greatest Love: Studying ancient languages and rune arrays. Motivation: To overthrow the current ruler, gaining the throne, through his own individual power not by the machinations of others as a puppet. Appearance: [img]http://i.imgur.com/5GyOJsG.png[/img] [/hider] **EDITED** [/quote] So, I'm with Crimson on combining rune and tattoo into one magic. Kudos for trying to make them unique though. Now, the only issue I have is that, also this is entirely subjective, magic is in a rocky place in public opinion. Remember that when writing posts. Also, hope he never runs into James. Cause he has divine judgement in his arsenal. Oh, Imperial Eye could stand tweaking for further balance, but we need to see it in use first. Tentative pass from me.