[quote=@Mr Allen J]
I changed Brooke's Pterosaur Launcher to Pterosaur Spin, because it didn't make sense.

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That said, I wanted to ask everyone what their thoughts on the RP were thus far? Anything I could do better?  
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I think you did a great job with character creation set-up.  It was sandboxy enough to really let people go wild with the ideas they had, which I think lets people get a lot more attached to the characters they make and more interested in sticking through, but had enough limitations and a clear setting/style to actually give people an anchor to hold on to, instead of getting lost in an incoherent white void of literally limitless possibility, which I see some sandboxy RPGs fall into.