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I see, my mistake. What if I added something like the following line:

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By having implanted the Tide-Controlling Jewel into her body, not only has Tamatori mutated into a half-human, half-octopus sea monster with superior strength and swimming ability, but she has also gained access to new magical powers, heralding her newfound status as a "successor of the Sea God". Despite having had no such ability before, she can now inherently practice Water Element magecraft of the highest level - such as being able to manipulate water to her will, using water as a form of attack, or generating streams of water to crush a single enemy. However, such magics are merely an artificial reenactment of the true power the Tide-Controlling Jewel grants its holder as one with absolute control over the tides and the sea itself.
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This would make it so that she can artificially use water magics on her own, but she would still need to actually invoke her NP's true name in order to use the more broken stuff (like the tsunami for example), thus keeping things balanced. Do you think this would fix the issue? If not, I'm open to other suggestions.

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[b]EDIT:[/b] I have also finished reworking my Master app. Backstory has been changed, any references to the Ainsworths have been removed, and nerfed his displacement magecraft a bit (by removing the whole putting people's souls in dolls thing from Prisma Illya). Also, since his family are still supposedly bigshots, he'd be classified as a "Known" Master, correct?

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Name: Xavier Arkwright

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Personality: Quite intelligent, educated and possessing fine manners, yet also humble and soft-spoken. Xavier enjoys simplicity and efficiency above all else, and will always strive to solve his problems in the quickest and simplest way possible, even if continuing to work his way around loopholes would’ve been easier. Despite his wealthy upbringing, he’s not one for extravagance or flaunting his wealth on the less fortunate. While he enjoys expensive suits, he could just as easily dress casually if it proves more efficient in a situation. He is also a terrible liar, since he believes it’s simpler to just say the truth; If he finds you boring, he will tell you with no restraint or hesitation.

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Biography: Xavier Arkwright showed much promise as a successor-in-the-making and was heralded as a child prodigy, particularly displaying a natural talent in the Arkwright family’s specialty - the displacement magecraft known as Flash Air - that became apparent even during the earliest stages of his training as a fledgling magus. Of course, simply being a promising magus is meaningless if you don’t keep your bloodline going by producing equally capable offspring to one day carry on your legacy. Unfortunately, young Xavier was a bit of an introverted bookworm growing up, showing little interest in searching for a suitable mate, so to speak. As such, when Xavier had reached a decent age for marriage, his family hand-picked a bride for their son who had proven to possess high-quality Magic Circuits, therefore ensuring in their eyes that their union would produce strong magi worthy of the Arkwright family name. Despite it being an arranged marriage, in a funny twist of the old cliche, Xavier and his fiancee ended up genuinely developing feelings for each other after some time.
Unfortunately, tragedy struck the Arkwright heir when his would-be wife fell into a deep coma, due to a medical condition too grave for her to be healed simply by the use of magecraft. With his newfound love now on life support, Xavier felt helpless and desperate for the first time in his life. After fruitlessly researching everything he could about his fiancee’s illness, he concluded that the only two ways to save her were either to somehow discover a new path to The Root, or to seek out the few individuals in this World capable of performing “true” magic. Neither of those options was viable at this point, as Xavier’s fiancee was running out of time.
It was at that point, however, that an opportunity presented itself, a third option… The Holy Grail War. While participating in such a crude sport full of backstabbing and foul play felt pretty quaint, Xavier knew that the omnipotent wish-granting capability of the Holy Grail was without a doubt the quickest and most surefire way to save his loved one. And so, the young Arkwright magus took off for Fuyuki City, Japan, determined to earn a wish from the Holy Grail that would change his fiancee’s otherwise inevitable fate...

Family History: The Arkwright family is a well-known, illustrious family of mages hailing from England. They have a long and extensive history, dating back nearly a thousand years. The family’s specialty is the displacement magecraft known as Flash Air - which does ring bells of a certain [url=http://typemoon.wikia.com/wiki/Ainsworth#Ainsworth]family from another World[/url] that exercised the same type of magecraft, but they have very little in common with them past that. The work of the Arkwright family seems to be mostly focused on the all too common goal of reaching The Root, all the while peacefully practicing their magecraft and keeping their bloodline going, like most mage families do.

Origin: Change

Elemental Affinity: Wind

Number of Magic Circuits: B

Quality of Magic Circuits: A

Od: C

Magecraft:
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[*] General Magecraft: Everything listed in the OP.
[*] Flash Air: The type of displacement magecraft that the Arkwright family have been practicing for nearly a thousand years. Displacing a portion of space can place hostile projectiles behind the enemy, allow for their own projectiles to change trajectory by shifting space, allow for them to have their limbs appear anywhere, and make their enemy's own attacks hit them from behind. By changing door and window relations, one can even rearrange entire building layouts with this technique. However, because such an application would require much higher concentration, cast time and Mana expenditure, it’d be all but useless in a combat situation.
[*] Wind Magecraft: Basic wind manipulation and wind-based magics. Xavier can create miniature tornadoes or spherical gusts of wind, which he can then send at many different directions at once thanks to his Flash Air magecraft.
[*] Reinforcement: Xavier can apply Reinforcement to weapons or other inanimate objects, as well as his own body - such as strengthening his body to withstand attacks, or Reinforcing his eyes to receive a pseudo-Clairvoyance level of perception, though obviously much lower than a Servant’s. Cannot Reinforce living beings other than himself.
[*] Healing Magecraft: Allows for much quicker healing of wounds or ailments than through normal means by accelerating the body’s healing factor and the regeneration of cells and tissues. May heal statuses such as Poison. Time and Mana expenditure needed are based on the severity of the wound or ailment.
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Equipment:
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[*] Mystic Code - Founder’s Ring: The Mystic Code passed down from one head of the Arkwright family to the next. It is a silver ring with a skull on it, originally worn by the family’s founder, whose name has been lost in the ages. While worn on one’s finger, it acts as an Amplifier to their Flash Air magecraft. The Ring has a strange kind of persistent displacement curse put on it that causes it to teleport back to its owner, even if they had thrown it away, tossed it in the ocean, or otherwise misplaced it or attempted to get rid of it. Xavier was given this Mystic Code by his father to help him during the duration of the War.
[*] Enough funds to live lavishly throughout the entirety of the War. The Arkwright’s are an illustrious family, after all. Luckily, Xavier is quite the modest spender, so it’s unlikely that he would unwittingly betray his status as a wealthy magus by drawing too much attention to his monetary status.
[*] Various sets of clothes, ranging from fine suits, to more casual wear (for when he wants to draw less attention to himself).
[*] Various books on magecraft, as well as study materials pertaining to the Holy Grail War (common information, such as how the Summoning ritual works, how Servant contracts work, etc, no information on the War’s “true purpose”).
[*] A map of Fuyuki City, along with a small Japanese dictionary of basic terms to be able to communicate with the locals to some degree.
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Skills: Less-than-average cook, surprisingly efficient at cleaning and other housekeeping duties, basic education in non-magi subjects, above-average intelligence, great at memorizing information, fast learner.
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