Ah, nvm on my character then. My grammar isn't great and neither is my punctuation in genral. I don't mind elaborating on some things, but I spent atleast an hour on the CS and it seems like it all needs to be redone. I understand your needing more details on her abilities and such to prevent god-moding but it's my preference to reveal more personal character details in the actual story since you don't know everything about someone the moment you meet them. I just don't think my writing style is advanced enough for this RP.  Sorry for waisting your time!

Oh and I have no idea how to delete a post, but if you need me to delete my posts just let me know how.