I'm gonna give my [@vote] to [i]Shattered Realities[/i]. 

[b]To the author:[/b] You may have noticed, but the way I wrote my piece was intended to freak the reader out. I feel like [u]you[/u] did a lot better at that than me. The repetitiveness got to me a little, I didn't like reading the same paragraph 3-5 times (I felt like I was missing some small details or something), but as a literary tool you did well using it to add to the setting. Good job.

[b]To everyone:[/b] Bravo. I enjoyed each of the stories, and it was actually really hard for me to choose which story to vote for. I can't wait to see what other awesome stories the next prompt will bring us!