[@coffeetime] Very well done! I like the detail of the history and the way she expresses her paranoia through superstition; you did a good job nailing the 'Changeling' concept, I think.

[@BubblegumQueen] Also very well done. The history section in particular is out of the park, and I really like your vision of the fae captor and his strange childishness. 

My only note for both of you before acceptance is that you could beef up the supernatural powers, if you wanted to; I know I didn't do a fantastic job of establishing just where the power level is. If either of you wanted your powers to be a bit more versatile or robust, that'd be fine; if you're happy where you are, that's cool too, though.

[@Pathfinder] I like him so far! I know you're not done, but just thought I'd chime in on that. I was sort of hoping one of the characters we'd get would be a big, nasty ogre like him, and I think the 'overstimulation from cheering' weakness is very cool and original.

[@XxLyraxX] To answer your question, not all changelings are grievously malformed, though as a rule they tend to be recognizably inhuman and sort of bizarre looking; the exception being some of the Wizened, who might just appear as diminutive or shriveled people, or the Fairest, some of whom look just like people who are sort of inhumanly beautiful and graceful. It's up to you, really.